This is really awesome, I love it! Although, not to be a pain in the neck, I'm not a pro at photography, but maybe, to make the picture look better, you could make the model a little less fuzzy, and clearer, so it looks like you're all alone, even from time. (Sorry, I couldn't think of a better way to say it). But, don't listen to me, it's your photo, and you're an amazing photographer, and I think you'll make the right decision on any revisions you do. Have a great day!

~MelancholyDaydream

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<MelancholyDaydream>i'd put 20 dollars that Misaniovent's done the peanut butter thing with his dog
<Misaniovent>MelancholyDaydream: Dude, fuck no.
<Misaniovent>omgomg
<dedredhed>IVE DONE THAT
<dedredhed>ITS HILARIOUS

oh no thank you...ur not a pain in the neck....thats what i was trying to do...it didnt come out right

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"If your still looking for a blanket sweetie im sorry but im no sort of fabric. "
Matthew Raspanti Photography

Like dude you have the icon i made, that is like the best compliment i've ever had hahaha

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"We never met, you and I
We were always inside, we were somewhere inside
one another. And I'll live without you love,
but what good is one glove, without the other? " - mewithoutYou <Gentlemen>

cool pants!

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Many that live deserve death. And some die that deserve life. Can you give it to them? Then be not too eager to deal out death in the name of justice, fearing for your own safety. Even the wise cannot see all ends.

- Gandalf

i really like the framing here... great choice with the black and white... and even a great contrast... i'm just not sure with the focus... is that a photoshop filter you put on? it really makes it hard to look at... i think without it you'd have a great piece here

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everyone's overturned... begging for rain.

uh i burned the background so he would stand out...yes i did use photoshop and thank you for the comment

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"If your still looking for a blanket sweetie im sorry but im no sort of fabric. "
Matthew Raspanti Photography

the effeckt strengthen the expression.. well done.. well done

Thats a good piece, I dont have any revision suggestions, I find it well done.

I can understand you completly!

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<sub>Eloísa Valdes,
Anthropologist by day, Deviant by night.

`Helewidis & ^estudio aka dA's Bonnie & Clyde</sub>